Tuesday, January 9, 2018

Tuesday- Thursday, January 9-11 Intro to Advertising Unit: history of advertising



Learning Targets:
I can cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain.
I can determine two or more central ideas of a text and analyze their development over the course of the text, including how they interact and build on one another to provide a complex analysis; provide an objective summary of the text.
I can analyze a complex set of ideas or sequence of events and explain how specific individuals, ideas, or events interact and develop over the course of the text.

Some of the following material has been excerpted from Project Muse, Volume 11, Issue 1, 2010. https://muse.jhu.edu/article/377516

ASSIGNMENT: To begin our unit on advertising, please read and watch the following material, responding to the questions.  For some responses you will be able to copy and past or weave into your own sentences. Some responses will require thought and analysis.  Due by the end of class on Thursday, January 11. There is a substantial amount of material. Use the class time productively. Extended responses should adhere to language conventions of spelling, capitalization and punctuation. You will need earbuds. 

A Brief History of Advertising in America
William M. O'Barr
ACCOMPANYING QUESTIONS
1. What do advertisements tell us about society?
2. What role did advertising play for those who chose to leave their homes for economic, social, religious or political reasons?
3. How does the early handbill selling coffee to Londoners reflect the social values of the time? Be specific.
4. How does the "dated- have a laugh" coffee commercial reflect the values of its time period?
5. What type of advertisements would one have found in Franklin and Banneker's almanacs?
6. Who was the first to recognize the monetary and entertainment purpose of personal ads?
7. Watch "salesman chicanery". What are some of the sales techniques you observe?
8. Name three ways P.T. Barnum's advertising was dubious.
9. What was the purpose of an advertising agency?
10. What was the purpose of the gimmicks promoted by advertising agencies?
11. What is a slogan?
12. How do slogans break with earlier techniques in advertising?
13. What is a brand?
14. Take a look at the images that reflect racial evolution of the three four brands posted. What cultural insights can you observe? Why have the companies changed their marketing?
15. Watch "early television advertising". This is a 10 minute clip. As you watch, take notes as to what you observe. Think about who is being marketed to? Are there any particular hooks that draw in the audience? What are values being reflected?  
Write a paragraph of approximately 100 words that reflects the key unifying aspects of these commercials you have noticed. 
16. Where in your own life do you note that advertising most impacts you?
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Introduction

Long before America was colonized, commerce flourished in the Old World where various methods were used to promote trade. Notice boards placed outside houses indicated what could be had within. Wine sellers gave free samples in the streets. And actors paraded in the streets attempting to entice onlookers into theatres. The idea of commerce is very old indeed, and the means of inducing others into exchange relationships was not far behind in its development.
An English Ad Promoting Migration to America, 1609
Once transplanted, advertising eventually flourished in the United States to rival other countries in prevalence and economic importance. Although some forms—radio and television commercials and Internet advertising, for example—are uniquely American, the history of advertising must begin in Europe. 
This following are key moments in the development of modern American advertising practice. It focuses on two key themes: the development of advertising techniques, and the story encoded in advertisements about the society that produced them. 
This history of advertising technique chronicles the movement from face-to-face selling messages to the stilted, repetitive, printed advertisements of early newspapers to the dynamism of mass communication by radio and television to the re-personalization of messages via cable, Internet, and direct mail. It is a story of sellers struggling to find the best means to attract buyers, and a parallel story of the public's reception, resistance, amusement, and annoyance.
The social history preserved in advertisements is like an archaeological record. It is not a simple, faithful chronology of society but an assortment of bits and pieces on which the passage of social life is inscribed. By their very nature, advertisements are fleeting and ephemeral. Once they serve their intended purpose, they are typically discarded and quickly replaced. But some ads survive, preserved in old newspapers and magazines, on wire and tape recordings, and in kinescopes and videotapes. These preserved advertisements can be studied in the present for what they reveal about our collective past. From them, we learn not only about the techniques of past advertising but also about the society that produced them and the lives of the people who wrote, read, and heard their messages.

2. European Precedents


We begin our story in the 1600s. Like the present, it was an age of globalization. A world that had seemed very grand and unknowable was being made smaller through exploration and discovery in the Elizabethan age. Sailing ships in unprecedented numbers set out from London to distant ports around the world—a conquest that would eventually lead to the development of the British Empire. At its height, British colonies around the world would form an empire on which, it would be said, the sun never set. This expansion included colonies in the New World that would later become the United States of America. 
In addition to this outward expansion, the world came to England as well. Strange, unusual, and wonderful things were brought from far away ports: spices from India, carpets from Persia, tobacco and tomatoes from the New World, porcelain from China, and coffee from Arabia. Each of these commodities had to be introduced to the consuming public and integrated into their lives—and advertising was one of the means of doing so. This handbill  announced the availability of coffee in London in 1657. Mercantilism was the most important motivating force in its early stages. There were many reasons settlers would decide to leave home and strike out for a new life abroad—religious, political, and economic being among the most important. But whatever specific reasons motivated colonial settlers, it must have required courage or desperation to give up home and family and cast your lot in an unknown land.      Advertising played its role in fueling these dreams and aspirations. To promote colonial ventures, sponsors placed ads in British newspapers: ads that promised solutions to nagging problems, ads that offered the fulfillment of dreams and the realization of hopes. 

An Early Handbill Introducing Coffee to Londoners, 1657
 A careful reading of the text provides a window on 17th-century advertising techniques and tells a story about the social life and cultural beliefs of the England into which coffee was introduced. The ad explains what coffee is, how it grows, and where it comes from.
The Grain or Berry called Coffee, groweth upon little Trees, only in the Deserts of Arabia. It is brought from thence...
Most contemporary advertisements do not introduce new products but serve instead to encourage current users to continue and those who are not yet current users to purchase the advertised brand. An advertisement for coffee today might argue for the merits of the promoted brand and proclaim its excellence over the competition. In this announcement from 1657, it is generic coffee that is advertised. Brands as we know them did not exist. It would be many years before branding emerged in the marketplace.
...and drunk generally throughout all the Grand Seigniors Dominions.
 The ad explains that the upper classes (the grand seigniors, or lords) drink coffee. Endorsement by high-status consumers is also often used in contemporary advertising, but celebrities rather than feudal lords are held up as models to emulate.
     The long copy of the ad gives more details. Coffee is simple to make, and here's how to consume it. Do this. Don't do that. It's better hot and on an empty stomach. Except for the quaint language, what is said here is hardly distinguishable from today's ads. It is easy to imagine a TV commercial for coffee moving through the similar steps: roasting the beans, grinding the coffee, adding fresh water, brewing it, and sitting down to enjoy a steaming mug of coffee.

WATCH THE FOLLOWING:



This Sanka Commercial from the 1960s describes the steps to buy, brew and drink coffee.

Excerpt from the printed advertisement above.

The Turks' drink at meals and other times, is usually Water, and their Dyet consists much of Fruit and the Crudities whereof are very much corrected by this Drink.... It is observed that in Turkey, where this is generally drunk, that they are not troubled with the Stone, Gout, Dropsie, or Scurvy, and that their Skins are exceeding clear and white. 
The narrative moves on to reported benefits for those who already drink coffee. Turks, unlike the English, have a diet high in uncooked fruit. The ad claims that coffee will alleviate gastric discomfort, and that other problems known in England are absent among coffee-drinking Turks. In a modern advertisement, similar information might be given in the form of testimonial comments from satisfied users.
The quality of this Drink is cold and Dry...
It neither heats nor inflames...
It closeth the Orifice of the Stomack and fortifies the heat...
It's very good to help digestion...
It's of great use about 3 or 4 o'clock in the afternoon, as well as in the morning...
It quickens the Spirits...
It makes the heart Lightsome...
It is good against sore Eys (better if you hold your Head over it and take in the Steem that way)...
It supplieth Fumes exceedingly, and therefore good against the Head-ach...
It will very much stop any Defluxion of Rheums...
It will prevent and help Consumption and the Cough of the Lungs...
It is excellent to prevent and cure the Dropsy, Gout, and Scurvy...  
Coffee, like tea, in this period was thought of more medicinally than today. Indeed, it almost seems that every known malady would be alleviated by coffee. After these claims about the benefits of coffee to anyone and everyone, the advertisement moves on to target specific kinds of consumers.
It is known by experience to be better then any other Drying Drink for People in years, or Children that have any running humors upon them...It is very good to prevent Mis-carryings in Child-bearing Women...
And finally the claims return to the general.
It is a most excellent Remedy against the Spleen, Hypocondriack, Winds, or the like.
It will prevent Drowsiness, and make one fit for busines, if one have occasion to Watch, and therefore you are not to Drink it after supper, unless you intend to be watchful, for it will hinder sleep 3 or 4 hours. 
Modern readers might be skeptical about many of these claims, but the warning about the stimulating effects of coffee works well today. "Drink it to stay awake, and don't drink it if you want to sleep." And finally, the ad includes a brief warning about the (few) things coffee cannot do as well as a notice as to where it can be found.
It is neither Laxative nor Restringent. Made and Sold in St. Michael's Alley in Cornhill, by Pasqua Rosee, at the Signe of his own Head
WATCH THE FOLLOWING COMMERCIAL: 




3. Colonial America


Fireplaces with small openings cause drafts or cold air to rush in at every crevice, and 'tis very uncomfortable as well as dangerous to sit against any such crevice.... Women, particularly, from this cause (as they sit much in the house) get colds in the head, rheums, and defluxions which fall into their jaws and gums, and have destroyed early, many a fine set of teeth in these northern colonies. Great and bright fires do also very much contribute to damaging the eyes, dry and shrivel the skin, bring on early the appearance of old age. 
A key figure in colonial American advertising was none other than Benjamin Franklin. As publisher of The Philadelphia Gazette and Poor Richard's Almanac, he changed advertising style by including simple illustrations (for example, a woodcut of a sailing ship or a spinning wheel) to accompany the words in ads. He began also to provide more details about benefits and uses than many of the ads that preceded him. He promoted his own famous stove in this way:
A Simple Woodcut Like This Illustrated Some American Ads in the Late 1700s
Ads that appeared in Franklin's newspaper, the Philadelphia Gazette, give a virtual description of life in Pre-Revolutionary America. All of the following appeared on a single page on 1735:
Please note that Franklin's contemporary Benjamin Banneker (free African American) used this same format in his popular almanac).

Franklin's ads are too difficult to read, but here are some of the advertisements: 
ODRAN DUPUY, next Door to the Bell in Arch-street, on Monday Feb. 10 opened a FRENCH SCHOOL. Where whoever enclines to learn the French Language, may be taught it on reasonable Terms. His Wife also teaches young Ladies Needle Work.
Antigua Rum, St. Kits Mellasses, Chocolate, Cotton, Ginger and Pepper, and sundry other Sorts of Goods Sold by wholesale or Retail, by William Graham, at the House where Henry Hodge lately dwelt.
A SERVANT Man's Time for 3 Years and Four Months, to be disposed of. He is a likely hearty young Fellow. Enquire of the Printer hereof.
Just imported, another Parcel of SUPER FINE CROWN SOAP. It cleanses Fine Linens, Muslins, Laces Chinces, Cambricks, etc. with Ease and Expedition, which often suffer more from the long and hard Rubbing of the Washer, through the ill Qualities of the soap they use than the wearing.
     Following American independence, more newspapers sprang up across the new country. One estimate claims that there were 35 newspapers in 1775 while there were 532 by 1820.7 As newsprint became more readily available, the newspaper flourished, becoming the first mass medium in American society.
4. The Age of the Newspaper
     James Gordon Bennett, publisher of the New York Herald from 1835 to 1867, is one of the most flamboyant characters in the history of American mass media. Born into an already wealthy family, he made another fortune selling newspapers. Bennett's approach was as ingenious as it was insistent. He latched onto the idea of raising the cost of advertisements to lower the cost of newspapers, a practice that continues into the present. He put an end to the seemingly endless repetition of ads from issue to issue that had characterized American newspapers from the colonial period well into the 19th century.
     Bennett first limited an ad's run to two weeks, and then later to a single day, giving readers cause to read ads more carefully. He also began printing ads throughout his paper, even on the front page, thus treating ads like news. To ensure readers and thus sales of his newspaper, Bennett did not shy away from the sensational—in either news or ads. He broke with the typical focus of other editors on political news and included stories from police files, courts, sports, theatres, and other events that had mass appeal. It was Bennett who underwrote the cost of sending Stanley to find Livingstone in Tanganyika in 1871, serializing the saga and keeping his readers entertained for months.
     Bennett also understood the entertainment value of personal want ads for his readers. Lacking radio and TV and having only a few magazines, a newspaper would have been savored and mused over. Personal ads in particular delighted readers who were yet to be weary from media bombardment and advertising clutter. Ads like these appeared in the pages of the New York Herald:
Dear Charles—Should such a trifle as a handy hat-brush sever true love? Come home to your ruffled LuLu.
Wanted—A situation as son-in-law in a respectable family. Blood and breeding no object, being already supplied; capital essential. No objection to going a short distance into the country.
     Although many forms of mass media compete for our attention today, the personals continue to intrigue readers. Here are some that appeared in New York Magazine:
Shrimps In My Cocktail Only Please—Need tall, leggy, lovely who can wear heels with ease and handle herself in the same manner. Travel in the US and abroad, theater, great food and just plain fun in the offing. Economy fares not in my itinerary; good education and a sense of humor a must. I am 6'5", 55, and looking for a relationship with a little solemnity and no strings.
This Man Can Bark—But he's no dog. Well-trained, smart, good-looking, athletic Jewish male, 31, seeks Jewish female, 26-30, with intelligence, wit, spontaneity and good looks. I'm 5'9" on my hind legs, 155 lbs, brown hair, blue eyes. Send papers and photo.
And these ones appeared in a  Valentine's Day edition of a college newspaper:
Chip, chip, chipper! Have a Happy Valentine's Day, Giraffe Woman and a blast in Florida. Just don't lose anything I wouldn't (especially panties).—Your "Little Brother."
To my only BOO: Thanks for five wonderfully "warm and gooey" months! I hope this Valentine's Day is the first of many we'll share! You are the most amazing male! YUM!!!
     Bennett understood the human interest appeal that such ads could have. By requiring ads to conform to a uniform style and without illustrations, he capitalized on the news value of single insertions. It was not long, however, before such techniques as iteration, unusual layout, and manipulating white space were used by advertisers to get around the restrictions. The mid-1800s was indeed the age of the newspaper but it was also the age of the newspaper advertisement—the most effective and cost efficient method of advertising the world had known.

5. Meanwhile in the Small Towns

     While Bennett and other newspapermen were developing the newspaper in large Eastern cities as a mass medium for advertising, direct selling messages remained common in smaller towns all over America. Store clerks continued to deal face-to-face with their customers, discussing the uses and benefits for the products they sold. However, by the mid-1800s itinerant salesmen had also become a part of American commerce. By 1900, there were an estimated 350,000 traveling men doing business in America.9 Some served as the middlemen between manufacturers and wholesalers and local stores all over America. Others sold directly to consumers door-to-door or in impromptu displays set up on street corners and other public venues. From the mid-19th until well into the 20th century, traveling salesmen filled a critical niche in American marketing.
     Salesmanship entered the English language only in the 1800s (according to the Oxford English Dictionary) and it differs from advertising in its use of face-to-face rather than mass-mediated communications and selling techniques. The promotional and selling methods of salesmen are the important elements in the history of advertising. Whether to a merchant, an assembled crowd, or just a single customer, a salesman displayed his merchandise and adjusted his pitch to the needs and interests of his audience. Holding a mythical bottle of "snake oil" in his hand, he could look out into a crowd and say to an old lady that his product could cure arthritis, to a young man that it would grow hair, and to someone else that it was a toothache remedy. Whether largely alcohol or cocaine or a medicine that really worked, the product was offered through a specially tailored message unlike the generalized pitches in mass advertisements.
WATCH THE FOLLOWING:
     By the beginning of the 20th century, an incipient consumer movement protesting the outrageous and unsupported claims of both the traveling salesmen and mass media advertising was developing. When Arthur Miller famously wrote about the failed Willy Loman in Death of a Salesman in 1949, his play captured the pitfalls of sales work for those who do it and the demise of the social niche of the salesman in the face of the evolution of mass, impersonal advertising techniques.

6. P. T. Barnum and the Age of Excess


    It is doubtful that Phineas Taylor Barnum (1810-1891) ever made two famous remarks attributed to him: "There's a sucker born every minute" and "You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you cannot fool all of the people all of the time." The frequent attribution of these remarks to Barnum, however, reveals a great deal about the public's lasting opinion of him. He was without a doubt one of the greatest showmen the world has known, but in the end he seems to have left more lingering doubts and suspicions rather than respect for his promotional methods. 
    Barnum's place in advertising history is in the realm of half-truths, exaggerations, and outright trickery. He seems to have had few scruples for doing whatever it took to attract an audience and make money from it. Deception was his game. In his famous museum in New York City, Barnum put up a sign that read, "This Way to the Egress." Visitors to the museum, often fooled by this antiquated word for "exit" and thinking they were headed for another fantastical exhibit, passed through a door and found themselves instead in the street! Barnum had enticed them inside. He had entertained them a bit. And then he needed them out of the way to make room for others.
     Barnum used advertising to lure crowds to his museum and traveling exhibits. In his early career, he focused on freaks and oddities that the public would pay to see. One of the most famous of these was known as the Fiji Mermaid (exhibited in 1842)—which his ads and posters claimed to be half human, half fish. In actuality, the so-called mermaid was a hoax, consisting of the head of a monkey attached to the body of a fish.


7. Advertising Agents Come on the Scene

     As America recovered from the Civil War (1861-1865), commerce and newspapers once again took their place in the fabric of society. In the 1860s and 1870s, the forerunners of modern advertising agents came on the scene. First offering to physically take ads from the shops of busy tradesmen to the offices of newspaper publishers, ad men provided a service that business found desirable. Two of the earliest agencies were N. W. Ayer in Philadelphia and J. Walter Thompson in New York. These agencies collected circulation figures of newspapers and magazines and based their commissions on readership.
     It was a short step from media placement to another service that indeed marked the beginnings of modern advertising. The agents offered to write the copy that would be placed in newspapers. By the turn of the 20th century, several advertising agencies had set up business in cities across America, marking the beginnings of a shift away from direct sales techniques to mass-communicated advertising.
A List of Magazines from 1889 with Rates for Placing Ads
     What are the similarities and differences between salesmanship and advertising? Although both are persuasive techniques encouraging consumer purchasing, one is interpersonal in nature whereas the other is mediated. The consequence of this difference is a shift from individually tailored messages, to those that must be relevant to a broad and diverse audience. 

8. Billboards, Trade Cards, and Other Advertising Strategies


     In the late 19th and early 20th centuries, advertising agencies came into their own by offering a wide range of services to the clients who hired them to help promote goods and services. One advertising gimmick was the inclusion of trade cards in packages of cigarettes and other forms of tobacco. Consumers were encouraged to collect entire series of glamorous women, movie stars, Indian chiefs, wonders of the world, and so on. Another technique invented by advertising agents was prizes in return for a specified number of proofs of purchase. 

This Series of Advertising Trade Cards from Cigarette Packages (late 1800s)

    By the end of the 19th century, advertising had proliferated beyond the newspaper and magazine to posters and billboards in public spaces. Trains and streetcars typically carried such notices and the public streets and byways were filled with billboards and other advertising posters.

Billboards Lined the Shores of the Hudson River around the Turn of the 20th Century


     All such techniques—and there were a great many of them—were ways in which advertising agents expanded their services beyond writing and placing ads in newspapers and magazines on behalf of their clients.

9. The Birth of the Slogan

Advertisements consisting of a central catchy phrase or slogan became the mode in the 1890s. Kodak advertised its camera with the phrase: "You Press the Button, We Do the Rest" in 1891. Other famous slogans that were used during this period were "Absolutely Pure" for Royal Baking Powder, "Eat H-O" for Hornby's Oatmeal, and "99 and 44/100% Pure" for Ivory Soap.



     The use of slogans as the focus of poster and newspaper advertising represented a break with the earlier technique of using long, wordy copy to explain the product and why the consumer should purchase it. Slogans focused instead on a single big idea expressed in the form of a memorable phrase, and ads using them often did not give "reasons why" to consumers. Nonetheless, "Do You Know Uneeda Biscuit?" sold crackers quite well.
     Fascination with slogans continues into contemporary advertising. Geico famously encourages potential customers to switch brands of automobile insurance with the slogan, So Easy a Caveman Can Do It. Nike's Just Do It is not only well known but a part of contemporary popular culture. The long-running campaign got milk? is one of the most memorable slogans in recent advertising history. Such phrases are so catchy that they are easily remembered, frequently repeated, and often parodied.

10. The Emergence of Brands

    Throughout most of the 19th century, customers took their own containers to stores where they bought generic sugar, rice, coffee, molasses, salt, and other products. The advent of packaged goods—a box of salt, a bag of rice, and a pound of coffee with a brand name on it—changed marketing forever. Rice was no longer just rice, and coffee wasn't just coffee. Proctor & Gamble, perhaps the world's best known maker of package goods, began selling Ivory Soap in 1879. Soon Uneeda Biscuit, Campbell's Soup, Quaker Oats, Royal Baking Powder, and Lipton Tea were on the shelves as well.
    What exactly is a brand? Marketers tell us that brands have material markers—names, logos, and unique packaging and designs. But beyond these essential physical attributes, over time a brand acquires a history, a reputation, and a meaning to consumers. In other words, it takes on a "personality.
Take a look at the evolution of the following brands, noting how they are reflective of race relations in the United States.
1909 Cream of Wheat

1916
1941

contemporary.....What are your thoughts?
Uncle Ben's Rice

He's now the CEO of the company
Uncle Ben


Aunt Jemima
now a professional

And here is Betty Crocker, who has been redesigned to have a Latina look.

11. Television and Commercials

Commercial television developed after World War II. By the late 1940s, cities like New York, Chicago, and Los Angeles had functioning local television stations. By the early 1950s, three major networks (NBC, CBS, and ABC) supplied national programming. Most early broadcasts were live, in black-and-white, and aired only a few hours each night. It was not long, however, before TV antennas sprung up all over America. The country was fascinated with the new medium, although early television was often little more than "radio with pictures." Talking heads delivered the news with little on-the-scene reporting. Variety and quiz shows as well as many dramatic performances typically took place before live studio audiences. National commercials with high production values advertised widely distributed products while local commercials were generally low-budget operations. Reception was often poor. Even passing cars and household appliances generated static on early TV sets. Despite all this, the magic of TV was entertainment on a scale unknown before.
Step back into the 1950's and watch this series of ads. 
Sugar Smacks, Alka Seltzer, Bosco, Tootsie Roll Pops, Fluffo Shortening, Swiss Creme Cookies, Old Gold Cigarettes, Ovaltine, Tang and Life Boy Soap

12. Commercializing Cyberspace

The Internet became an essential part of American society in the 1990s. Computers replaced typewriters and email established itself as a necessity. Today, instantaneous communication with people everywhere is simple, and information on almost any topic is just a few keystrokes away.  
Mass media began to decline with the advent of cable television in the 1970s. Until then, viewing options were limited and audiences were broad. Ads on cable, because of the proliferation of specialized programming, created more targeted groups of viewers with more narrowly defined interests. Broadcasting became narrowcasting, and advertising became more focused as well. Home and Garden channel viewers get advertisements for paint and other building products while Travel Channel viewers see ads for airlines and vacation spots. The Internet narrows the aim further, not reaching households but targeting individuals. Marketers use Internet surfing habits to establish the interests and buying habits of individuals, making advertising more efficient. A repersonalization of messages is occurring — ironically bringing advertising back around to speaking more individually to potential customers.
But what does the future hold for advertising? As the world of corporations and advertising charts its future, the search for new advertising venues goes on. Advertising has been very innovative in the past in finding ways to communicate promotional messages. As technology has evolved, it has revolutionized advertising techniques as well as changing the social landscape. There is no reason to suspect that advertising will not continue to reinvent itself, discover new media, and develop new techniques. Advertising as we know it may be at its end, but the culture of consumption is alive and well.

Monday, January 1, 2018

Tuesday-Monday, January 2-8: culminating satirical writing assessment

Learning targets:


I can cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain.

I can determine two or more themes or central ideas of a text and analyze their development over the course of the text, including how they interact and build on one another to produce a complex account; provide an objective summary of the text.

I can analyze the impact of the author's choices regarding how to develop and relate elements of a story or drama.
I can write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence.
I can develop the topic thoroughly by selecting the most significant and relevant facts, extended definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples appropriate to the audience's knowledge of the topic.
I can provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument presented.

To what is the above image referencing?

As everyone should be refreshed, this seems the best time to work with more challenging material. The culminating writing assignment on satire - note that you are not writing a personal satirical piece- will count for two writing grades. Please read the directions carefully. This will be your most challenging assignment of the year. If you stay focused and on task, you will not need to work on this outside of class.

Do not work on previous missing assignments. These are worth only 50 points when you turn them in. You will need this week to successfully complete the following assignment.

Your assignment: How does Swift's  A Modest Proposal utilize the seven golden rules to "prick people's consciousness and challenge the powerful" and how effective are their techniques? (Remember this is an analysis paper; your opinion is of no importance.)

Details: MLA heading, Times New Roman, size 12 font, correct citations (check below for your works cited (I looked them up); however, don't forget internal citations and any other material you read.

approximately 500 words  DUE IN CLASS ON MONDAY, January 8. If you receive extended time, you may send it along by midnight. Plan accordingly.

For  grading, I'll use the standard ELA rubric. There is a copy at the end of the blog. Before sending along your assignment, compare your work with the rubric.

How are you going to answer the above question? You will be working with three pieces of writing: the BBC article What's the Point of Satire, an article written by a professional satirist The Seven Golden Rules of Satire and finally the 18th century satirist Jonathan Swift's A Modest Proposal

1. Read and take notes on the BBC article What's the Point of Satire

What's the Point of Satire


Take your time and read slowly. Look up any words you are unfamiliar with and ask for help. You will be referencing this material for the actual assignment.
citation: 
“A Point of View: What's the point of satire?” BBC News, BBC, 13 Feb. 2015, www.bbc.com/news/magazine-31442441.

2. Read The Seven Golden Rules of Satire and take notes, as you will need to reference this article as well. 

The Seven Golden Rules of Satire

citation: 
Ramadmin. “Seven Golden Rules for the writing of Satire.” Rum and Monkey, 23 Mar. 2015, rumandmonkey.com/articles/203/.


3. Read A Modest Proposal by Jonathan Swift. Below you will find a copy. This is an important historical example of satire. The copy below has been annotated at the end. Here is a direct link, if you prefer: A Modest Proposal    Take your time. Frame your argument in answering the question as you read based upon the previous articles.  There are numerous on-line sources, if you struggle with with reading. Make sure you put those in your works cited. Remember you are building an argument as to how the above two articles are reflected- or not- in Swift's A Modest Proposal.

citation:“A Modest Proposal.” Swift, "A Modest Proposal", andromeda.rutgers.edu/~jlynch/Texts/modest.html.

A Modest Proposal

For Preventing the Children of Poor People
in Ireland, from Being a Burden on Their Parents
or Country, and for Making Them
Beneficial to the Publick

By Jonathan Swift

Edited and annotated by Jack Lynch

Swift was Irish, and though he much preferred living in England, he resented British policies toward the Irish. In a letter to Pope of 1729, he wrote, "Imagine a nation the two-thirds of whose revenues are spent out of it, and who are not permitted to trade with the other third, and where the pride of the women will not suffer [allow] them to wear their own manufactures even where they excel what come from abroad: This is the true state of Ireland in a very few words." His support for Irish causes has made him a renowned figure in modern Ireland. The paragraph numbers have been added for this edition.

[1] It is a melancholly Object to those, who walk through this great Town, 1  or travel in the Country, when they see the Streets, the Roads, and Cabbin-Doors, crowded with Beggars of the female Sex, followed by three, four, or six Children, all in Rags, and importuning every Passenger for an Alms. These Mothers instead of being able to work for their honest livelyhood, are forced to employ all their time in Stroling, to beg Sustenance for their helpless Infants, who, as they grow up either turn Thieves for want of work, or leave their dear native Country to fight for the Pretender in Spain, 2  or sell themselves to the Barbadoes. 3 

[2] I think it is agreed by all Parties, that this prodigious number of Children, in the Arms, or on the Backs, or at the heels of their Mothers, and frequently of their Fathers, is in the present deplorable state of the Kingdom, a very great additional grievance; and therefore whoever could find out a fair, cheap and easy method of making these Children sound and useful Members of the common-wealth would deserve so well of the publick, as to have his Statue set up for a preserver of the Nation.

[3] But my Intention is very far from being confined to provide only for the Children of professed beggars, it is of a much greater extent, and shall take in the whole number of Infants at a certain Age, who are born of Parents in effect as little able to support them, as those who demand our Charity in the Streets.

[4] As to my own part, having turned my thoughts for many Years, upon this important Subject, and maturely weighed the several Schemes of other Projectors, 4  I have always found them grossly mistaken in their computation. It is true a Child, just dropt from it's Dam, 5  may be supported by her Milk, for a Solar year with little other Nourishment, at most not above the Value of two Shillings, which the Mother may certainly get, or the Value in Scraps, by her lawful Occupation of begging, and it is exactly at one year Old that I propose to provide for them, in such a manner, as, instead of being a Charge upon their Parents, or the Parish, 6  or wanting 7  Food and Raiment for the rest of their Lives, they shall, on the Contrary, contribute to the Feeding and partly to the Cloathing of many Thousands.

[5] There is likewise another great Advantage in my Scheme, that it will prevent those voluntary Abortions, and that horrid practice of Women murdering their Bastard Children, alas! too frequent among us, Sacrificing the poor innocent Babes, I doubt, 8  more to avoid the Expence, than the Shame, which would move Tears and Pity in the most Savage and inhuman breast.

[6] The number of Souls in this Kingdom being usually reckoned one Million and a half, Of these I calculate there may be about two hundred thousand Couple whose Wives are breeders, from which number I Substract thirty Thousand Couples, who are able to maintain their own Children, although I apprehend 9  there cannot be so many, under the present distresses of the Kingdom, but this being granted, there will remain an hundred and seventy thousand Breeders. I again Subtract fifty Thousand for those Women who miscarry, or whose Children dye by accident, or disease within the Year. There only remain an hundred and twenty thousand Children of poor Parents annually born: The question therefore is, How this number shall be reared, and provided for, which, as I have already said, under the present Situation of Affairs, is utterly impossible by all the methods hitherto proposed, for we can neither employ them in Handicraft, or Agriculture; we neither build Houses, (I mean in the Country) nor cultivate Land: 10  they can very seldom pick up a Livelyhood by Stealing until they arrive at six years Old, except where they are of towardly parts, 11  although, I confess they learn the Rudiments much earlier; during which time they can however be properly looked upon only as Probationers, as I have been informed by a principal Gentleman in the County of Cavan, who protested to me, that he never knew above one or two Instances under the Age of six, even in a part of the Kingdom so renowned for the quickest proficiency in that Art.


[7] I am assured by our Merchants, that a Boy or Girl, before twelve years Old, is no saleable Commodity, and even when they come to this Age, they will not yield above three Pounds, or three Pounds and half a Crown at most on the Exchange, which cannot turn to Account either to the Parents or the Kingdom, the Charge of Nutriments and Rags having been at least four times that Value.

[8] I shall now therefore humbly propose my own thoughts, which I hope will not be lyable to the least Objection.

[9] I have been assured by a very knowing American of my acquaintance in London, that a young healthy Child well Nursed is at a year Old, a most delicious, nourishing, and wholesome Food, whether StewedRoastedBaked, or Boyled, and I make no doubt that it will equally serve in a Fricasie, or Ragoust. 12 


[10] I do therefore humbly offer it to publick consideration, that of the hundred and twenty thousand Children, already computed, twenty thousand may be reserved for Breed, whereof only one fourth part to be Males, which is more than we allow to Sheepblack Cattle, or Swine, and my reason is, that these Children are seldom the Fruits of Marriage, a Circumstance not much regarded by our Savages, therefore, one Male will be sufficient to serve four Females. That the remaining hundred thousand may at a year Old be offered in Sale to the persons of Quality, 13  and Fortune, through the Kingdom, always advising the Mother to let them Suck plentifully in the last Month, so as to render them Plump, and Fat for a good Table. A Child will make two Dishes at an Entertainment for Friends, and when the Family dines alone, the fore or hind Quarter will make a reasonable Dish, and seasoned with a little Pepper or Salt will be very good Boiled on the fourth Day, especially in Winter.

[11] I have reckoned upon a Medium, that a Child just born will weigh 12 pounds, and in a solar Year if tollerably nursed encreaseth to 28 Pounds.

[12] I grant this food will be somewhat dear, 14  and therefore very proper for Landlords, 15  who, as they have already devoured most of the Parents, seem to have the best Title to the Children.

[13] Infant's flesh will be in Season throughout the Year, but more plentiful in March, and a little before and after; for we are told by a grave Author 16  an eminent Frenchphysitian, that Fish being a prolifick Dyet, there are more Children born in Roman Catholick Countries about nine Months after Lent, than at any other Season, therefore reckoning a Year after Lent, the Markets will be more glutted than usual, because the Number of Popish Infants, is at least three to one in this Kingdom, and therefore it will have one other Collateral advantage by lessening the Number of Papists among us.

[14] I have already computed the Charge of nursing a Beggars Child (in which list I reckon all CottagersLabourers, and four fifths of the Farmers) to be about two Shillings per Annum, Rags included; and I believe no Gentleman would repine to give Ten Shillings for the Carcass of a good fat Child, which, as I have said will make four Dishes of excellent Nutritive Meat, when he hath only some particular friend, or his own Family to Dine with him. Thus the Squire will learn to be a good Landlord, and grow popular among his Tenants, the Mother will have Eight Shillings neat profit, and be fit for Work till she produceth another Child.

[15] Those who are more thrifty (as I must confess the Times require) may flay the Carcass; the Skin of which, Artificially 17  dressed, will make admirable Gloves for Ladies, and Summer Boots for fine Gentlemen.

[16] As to our City of Dublin, Shambles 18  may be appointed for this purpose, in the most convenient parts of it, and Butchers we may be assured will not be wanting, although I rather recommend buying the Children alive, and dressing them hot from the Knife, as we do roasting Pigs.

[17] A very worthy Person, a true Lover of his Country, and whose Virtues I highly esteem, was lately pleased, in discoursing on this matter, to offer a refinement upon my Scheme. He said, that many Gentlemen of this Kingdom, having of late destroyed their Deer, he conceived that the want of Venison might be well supplyed by the Bodies of young Lads and Maidens, not exceeding fourteen Years of Age, nor under twelve; so great a Number of both Sexes in every County being now ready to Starve, for want of Work and Service: And these to be disposed of by their Parents if alive, or otherwise by their nearest Relations. But with due deference to so excellent a friend, and so deserving a Patriot, I cannot be altogether in his Sentiments, for as to the Males, my American acquaintance assured me from frequent Experience, that their flesh was generally Tough and Lean, like that of our School-boys, by continual exercise, and their Taste disagreeable, and to Fatten them would not answer the Charge. Then as to the Females, it would, I think, with humble Submission, be a loss to the Publick, because they soon would become Breeders themselves: And besides it is not improbable that some scrupulous People might be apt to Censure such a Practice, (although indeed very unjustly) as a little bordering upon Cruelty, which, I confess, hath always been with me the strongest objection against any Project, how well soever intended.

[18] But in order to justify my friend, he confessed, that this expedient was put into his head by the famous Sallmanaazor, 19  a Native of the Island Formosa, who came from thence to London, above twenty Years ago, and in Conversation told my friend, that in his Country when any young Person happened to be put to Death, the Executioner sold the Carcass to Persons of Quality, as a prime Dainty, and that, in his Time, the Body of a plump Girl of fifteen, who was crucifyed for an attempt to Poison the Emperor, was sold to his Imperial Majesty's prime Minister of State, and other great Mandarins 20  of the Court, in Joints from the Gibbet, 21  at four hundred Crowns. Neither indeed can I deny, that if the same use were made of several plump young Girls in this Town, who, without one single Groat 22  to their Fortunes, cannot stir abroad without a Chair, 23  and appear at a Play-House, and Assemblies in Foreign fineries, which they never will Pay for; the Kingdom would not be the worse.

[19] Some Persons of a desponding Spirit are in great concern about that vast Number of poor People, who are aged, diseased, or maimed, and I have been desired to imploy my thoughts what Course may be taken, to ease the Nation of so grievous an Incumbrance. But I am not in the least pain upon that matter, because it is very well known, that they are every Day dying, and rotting, by cold, and famine, and filth, and vermin, as fast as can be reasonably expected. And as to the younger Labourers they are now in almost as hopeful a Condition. They cannot get Work, and consequently pine away from want of Nourishment, to a degree, that if at any time they are accidentally hired to common Labour, they have not strength to perform it, and thus the Country and themselves are happily delivered from the Evils to come.

[20] I have too long digressed, and therefore shall return to my subject. I think the advantages by the Proposal which I have made are obvious and many, as well as of the highest importance.

[21] For first, as I have already observed, it would greatly lessen the Number of Papists, with whom we are Yearly over-run, being the principal Breeders of the Nation, as well as our most dangerous Enemies, and who stay at home on purpose with a design to deliver the Kingdom to the Pretender, hoping to take their Advantage by the absence of so many good Protestants, 24  who have chosen rather to leave their Country, than stay at home, and pay Tythes against their Conscience, to an idolatrous Episcopal Curate.

[22] Secondly, the poorer Tenants will have something valuable of their own, which by Law may be made lyable to Distress, 25  and help to pay their Landlord's Rent, their Corn and Cattle being already seazed, and Money a thing unknown.

[23] Thirdly, Whereas the Maintainance of an hundred thousand Children, from two Years old, and upwards, cannot be computed at less than Ten Shillings a piece per Annum, the Nation's Stock will be thereby encreased fifty thousand pounds per Annum, besides the profit of a new Dish, introduced to the Tables of all Gentlemen of Fortune in the Kingdom, who have any refinement in Taste, and the Money will circulate among our selves, the Goods being entirely of our own Growth and Manufacture.

[24] Fourthly, The constant Breeders, besides the gain of Eight Shillings Sterling per Annum, by the Sale of their Children, will be rid of the Charge of maintaining them after the first Year.

[25] Fifthly, this food would likewise bring great Custom to Taverns, where the Vintners will certainly be so prudent as to procure the best receipts 26  for dressing it to perfection, and consequently have their Houses frequented by all the fine Gentlemen, who justly value themselves upon their knowledge in good Eating, and a skillful Cook, who understands how to oblige his Guests will contrive to make it as expensive as they please.

[26] Sixthly, This would be a great Inducement to Marriage, which all wise Nations have either encouraged by Rewards, or enforced by Laws and Penalties. It would encrease the care and tenderness of Mothers towards their Children, when they were sure of a Settlement for Life, to the poor Babes, provided in some sort by the Publick to their Annual profit instead of Expence, we should soon see an honest Emulation among the married women, which of them could bring the fattest Child to the Market, Men would become as fond of their Wives, during the Time of their Pregnancy, as they are now of their Mares in Foal, their Cows in Calf, or Sows when they are ready to Farrow, nor offer to Beat or Kick them (as is too frequent a practice) for fear of a Miscarriage.

[27] Many other advantages might be enumerated: For Instance, the addition of some thousand Carcases in our exportation of Barreled Beef. The Propagation of Swines Flesh, and Improvement in the Art of making good Bacon, so much wanted among us by the great destruction of Pigs, too frequent at our Tables, which are no way comparable in Taste, or Magnificence to a well grown, fat Yearling Child, which Roasted whole will make a considerable Figure at a Lord Mayor's Feast, or any other Publick Entertainment. But this, and many others I omit being studious of Brevity.

[28] Supposing that one thousand Families in this City, would be constant Customers for Infants Flesh, besides others who might have it at Merry-meetings, particularly at Weddings and Christenings, I compute that Dublin would take off Annually about twenty thousand Carcases, and the rest of the Kingdom (where probably they will be Sold somewhat Cheaper) the remaining eighty thousand.

[29] I can think of no one Objection, that will possibly be raised against this Proposal, unless it should be urged, that the Number of People will be thereby much lessened in the Kingdom. This I freely own, 27  and it was indeed one Principal design in offering it to the World. I desire the Reader will observe, that I Calculate my Remedy for this one individual Kingdom of IRELAND, and for no other that ever was, is, or, I think, ever can be upon Earth. Therefore let no man talk to me of other expedients: 28  Of taxing our Absentees at five Shillings a pound: 29  Of using neither Cloaths, nor household Furniture, except what is of our own Growth and Manufacture: Of utterly rejecting the Materials and Instruments that promote Foreign Luxury: Of curing the Expenciveness of Pride, Vanity, Idleness, and Gaming in our Women: Of introducing a Vein of Parcimony, Prudence and Temperance: Of learning to Love our Country, wherein we differ even from LAPLANDERS, and the Inhabitants of TOPINAMBOO: 30  Of quitting our Animosities, and Factions, nor Act any longer like the Jews, who were Murdering one another at the very moment their City was taken: 31  Of being a little Cautious not to Sell our Country and Consciences for nothing: Of teaching Landlords to have at least one degree of Mercy towards their Tenants. Lastly of putting a Spirit of Honesty, Industry and Skill into our Shop-keepers, who, if a Resolution could now be taken to Buy only our Native Goods, would immediately unite to Cheat and Exact 32  upon us in the Price, the Measure, and the Goodness, nor could ever yet be brought to make one fair Proposal of just dealing, though often and earnestly invited to it.

[30] Therefore I repeat, let no Man talk to me of these and the like Expedients, till he hath at least a Glimpse of Hope, that there will ever be some hearty and sincere attempt to put them into Practice.

[31] But as to my self, having been wearied out for many Years with offering vain, idle, visionary thoughts, and at length utterly despairing of Success, I fortunately fell upon this Proposal, which as it is wholly new, so it hath something Solid and Real, of no Expence and little Trouble, full in our own Power, and whereby we can incur no Danger indisobliging England. For this kind of Commodity will not bear Exportation, the Flesh being of too tender a Consistance, to admit a long continuance in Salt, although perhaps I could name a Country, which would be glad to Eat up our whole Nation without it. 33 

[32] After all I am not so violently bent upon my own Opinion, as to reject any Offer, proposed by wise Men, which shall be found equally Innocent, Cheap, Easy and Effectual. But before something of that kind shall be advanced in Contradiction to my Scheme, and offering a better, I desire the Author, or Authors will be pleased maturely to consider two points. First, As things now stand, how they will be able to find Food and Raiment for a hundred thousand useless Mouths and Backs. And Secondly, there being a round Million of Creatures in humane Figure, throughout this Kingdom, whose whole Subsistence put into a common Stock, would leave them in Debt two Millions of Pounds Sterling adding those, who are Beggars by Profession, to the Bulk of Farmers, Cottagers and Labourers with their Wives and Children, who are Beggars in Effect; I desire thosePoliticians, who dislike my Overture, and may perhaps be so bold to attempt an Answer, that they will first ask the Parents of these Mortals, whether they would not at this Day think it a great Happiness to have been sold for Food at a year Old, in the manner I prescribe, and thereby have avoided such a perpetual Scene of Misfortunes, as they have since gone through, by the oppression of Landlords, the Impossibility of paying Rent without Money or Trade, the want of common Sustenance, with neither House nor Cloaths to cover them from Inclemencies of Weather, and the most inevitable Prospect of intailing the like, or greater Miseries upon their Breed for ever.

[33] I Profess in the sincerity of my Heart that I have not the least personal Interest in endeavouring to promote this necessary Work having no other Motive than the publick Good of my Country, by advancing our Trade, providing for Infants, relieving the Poor, and giving some Pleasure to the Rich. I have no Children, by which I can propose to get a single Penny; the youngest being nine Years old, and my Wife past Child-bearing.

Notes

1. Dublin.
2. The Pretender was the descendant of King James II of the House of Stuart, expelled from Britain in 1689. James and his descendants were Catholic, so they took refuge in Catholic countries.
3. Many poor Irish were forced to seek a living in the New World.
4. Projector, "One who forms schemes or designs" (Johnson).
5. Dam, "The mother: used of beasts, or other animals not human," or "A human mother: in contempt or detestation" (Johnson).
6. Parishes were responsible for the support of those unable to work.
7. Wanting, "lacking."
8. Doubt, "suspect" or "imagine."
9. Apprehend, "fear."
10. Britain imposed strict regulations on Irish agriculture.
11. Towardly parts, "ready abilities."
12. Fricasee, "A dish made by cutting chickens or other small things in pieces, and dressing them with strong sauce" (Johnson); ragout, "Meat stewed and highly seasoned" (Johnson).
13. Quality, "Rank; superiority of birth or station" (Johnson).
14. Dear, "expensive."
15. British landlords took much of the blame for Ireland's condition, and generally with good reason.
16. Swift's note: "Rabelais."
17. Artificially, "skillfully."
18. Shambles, "meat markets."
19. George Psalmanazar, an impostor who claimed to be from Formosa (modern Taiwan). His Historical and Geographical Description of Formosa (1704) described their religious practices: every year 18,000 young boys were sacrificed to the gods, and the parishioners ate their raw hearts.
20. Mandarin, "A Chinese nobleman or magistrate" (Johnson).
21. Gibbet, "A gallows; the post on which malefactors are hanged, or on which their carcases are exposed" (Johnson).
22. A groat is worth four pence; proverbially, any small amount.
23. Chair, "A vehicle born by men; a sedan" (Johnson).
24. Dissenters or Nonconformists, whose principles Swift rejected.
25. Distress, "arrest for debt."
26. Receipts, "[From recipe.] Prescription of ingredients for any composition" (Johnson).
27. Own, "admit."
28. These "expedients" are serious proposals, several of which Swift advocated in his other publications.
29. Five shillings a pound is a twenty-five percent tax.
30. Topinamboo, a district in Brazil.
31. Titus sacked the Second Temple in Jerusalem in A.D. 70.
32. Exact, "impose."
33. Swift is making a coy reference to England.



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